Presentation Feedback

hm.. this is feedbacks of our presentation in English class…
Presentation Feedback
1.  Always acknowledge the source of info
2.  Structure & Spelling

WRONG
SHOULD BE

Is it have…?
Does it have…?

We are can
We can

We can browsing
We can browse

beautifull
beautiful

conclution
conclusion

pressentation
presentation

presentate
present

3.  Pronunciation

adult
business

general
enough

virtual
eBay

technology
execute

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do ya understand ?